Preliminary Task

R1-14 feedback

logo is good.
freeze shots are effective and work well with the style.
background music suits the genre.
acting is good.
fight scene needed to be a bit more realistic when kicking the person.
isnt clear what might happen in the rest of the film.

Feedback from R1-16

-We like the logo and think that it fits the genre and looks professional.
-We also think that the black and white effect is good and puts emphasis on the main themes.
-The music fits the genre really well because it is something that the target audience would listen to.
-The titles could be bolder because you dont really notice that there are any.

Feedback from R1-17

- Not sure about logo, doesn't seem to fit in with the genre you're working with.
- We like how the music comes in, from non diagetic sound to diagetic music.
- Good establishing shots of location.

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Feedback

The still shots were effective showing the controversy in the scene. Good variation of shot types. The zoom in followed by a still shot was at the fight scene was effective because you could see the pain the character was going through. The music didn't seem to fit in with the story trying to be portrayed. Titles were plain could of used something different.

Final Piece

Here is our piece

Plan of action for changes intended to final opening

- Speed up the smoking shots

-Add more titles (in the shots)

-Clean up some shots (less shaky/choppy)

-Improve sound

-Make the ending more understandable

-Edit footage sequences

Filming Feedback

Mise en Scene

- Stereotypical costumes which work well
- Use of college and street shots suit

Camerawork

- Nice close up of smoking
- Bit shaky
- Good shot angles

Editing
Last scene doesn't make sense, viewer left wondering what;s going on because titles are incomplete.

Sound

- Need to edit out unwanted sound

Generic Conventions

- British Social:

Establishing street shots
Smoking/dealing/fight scene
Music is strong