Feedback from R1-17

- Not sure about logo, doesn't seem to fit in with the genre you're working with.
- We like how the music comes in, from non diagetic sound to diagetic music.
- Good establishing shots of location.

Feedback

The still shots were effective showing the controversy in the scene. Good variation of shot types. The zoom in followed by a still shot was at the fight scene was effective because you could see the pain the character was going through. The music didn't seem to fit in with the story trying to be portrayed. Titles were plain could of used something different.